Saturday, May 14, 2011

I agree with fisher. there is to many time where cell causes rudeness such as church , funerals and weddings. We have all seen this, it is almost normal to see people talking to themselves now a days. Cellphone are turning our society into social zombies. Cellphone usage in public causes confusion.

Due to there size and the use of a headset it is confusing to know whether or not a person is talking to you. Back in high school I took a trip to UC Davis to visit the campus. As I was walking to the campus this guy was seemingly yelling at me. I never met the guy and I didn’t know what I could of done to offend him. Turns out he was just on his phone, using his headset.
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  1. BrianJMay 15, 2011 at 1:26 PM

    I don't see how you answered the prompt. I noticed good visual. I could immediately see a guy with a Bluetooth on his ear talking to himself.

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  2. TiffanySMay 17, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    You somewhat answered the prompt, only one part though. You should proofread and use spell check, it kind of seems like you were in a rush to write your blog. There was not much detail and it was very vague. You had a great example but left me wanting to know more. It has the potential to be a great essay. I loved your “social zombies” comparison, great sensory detail that I could totally picture in my head.

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  3. CeleneRMay 18, 2011 at 6:52 AM

    Dennis, I agree with Brian and Tiffany. You somewhat answered the prompt. You should proofread your post, because there are some grammar errors. You could have used a lot more descriptive words. I also agree with Tiffany on your "social zombies" comparison.

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  4. YoonSMay 18, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    You didn't really answer the prompt. The blog can be more descriptive.

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